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These Vicious Delights

Ignite the Stars by Maura Milan (2018)

Ignite the Stars is an action-packed YA sci-fi novel with a slow burn enemies to lovers romance and an enemies to friends relationship. I rated it 5/5 stars.

This review was originally posted on Goodreads, where most of my reviews are increasingly published. Check out the original review here.

What is Ignite the Stars about?

Everyone in the universe knows his name. Everyone in the universe fears him. But no one realizes that notorious outlaw Ia Cōcha is a seventeen-year-old girl.
A criminal mastermind and unrivaled pilot, Ia has spent her life terrorizing the Olympus Commonwealth, the imperialist nation that destroyed her home. When the Commonwealth captures her and her true identity is exposed, they see Ia’s age and talent as an opportunity: by forcing her to serve them, they will prove that no one is beyond their control.
Soon, Ia is trapped at the Commonwealth’s military academy, desperately plotting her escape. But new acquaintances—including Brinn, a seemingly average student with a closely-held secret, and their charming Flight Master, Knives—cause Ia to question her own alliances. Can she find a way to escape the Commonwealth’s clutches before these bonds deepen?

Potential AO3 tags:
  • Slow sloww burn
  • Hate to love (both romantic and platonic)
  • Asian MC
  • Battling space imperialism
  • They Annoy Each Other Until They Fall in Love
  • "I'm Just Using Him," She Said (Reader, She Lied)

On to the review...

Mif, where do I even start?

I had some minor issues with this novel but they won't stop me from rating it a solid 5 stars.

WARNING: This review points out all the positives of this novel. Yeah, it's not balanced. In terms of romance, I hardcore shipped them at the beginning, but at the end I cared about everything equally--protagonist, plot, love story, even her other relationships. This is not a romance-centered novel. It's a plotty sci-fi read that balances character relationships with plot and action.

Let's meet our main character Ia. The Blood Wolf of the Skies. You've seen this protagonist before. She's a ruthless war criminal, a badass bitch who isn't here to make friends. She fights for a noble cause but she also takes glee in torturing her enemies. She loves her brother though, and her main character arc results in her learning some compassion and friendship.

But I love Ia because her brutality isn't censored. There are consequences to all that blood on her hands. She knows that she's done terrible things and doesn't excuse herself. While her inner softie is eventually revealed, it doesn't take over. So many times, "ruthless" YA protagonists turn into simpering, feather-soft woobies. Ia is not one of those.

Ia learns to acknowledge that there are two sides. Even if she's fighting against a corrupt colonizer--the Commonwealth--those are still soldiers on the other side of the battlefield. Real humans whose lives she's ruined. And she feels guilty about that. But she doesn't wallow in self-pity. I thought that was pretty refreshing. I usually looove angst (sorry) but I adore her internal strength too.

Then we have Knives, jaded starboy and Ia's love interest. Their romance was an intense slow burn that hooked me at first. I mean, they start out despising each other. They fight and beat each other up and it's no secret they're sworn enemies. Eventually they become friends and then lovers. I wasn't that convinced by the romance at the end (I thought it would be much slower going) but I still didn't mind it. Knives' father is a famous general and everyone expects him to follow in his family's footsteps. But after his star pilot sister was killed on a mission, he's gotten rid of his rose-colored glasses and seen the Commonwealth for the soulless machine that it really is.

Lastly, Brinn. She annoyed me at first but eventually grew on me. Her character is pretty fascinating. She's a Tawny, an oppressed race that's forced to become refugees on Commonwealth planets. But she grew up in the Commonwealth and loves the Commonwealth. She hides her Tawny identity, hates it, and considers herself a Commonwealth Citizen first and foremost. Her sheer nationalism despite how terribly her people have been treated is a fascinating parallel, I think, and also reminds me a bit of Lost Stars.

The novel starts with some fast-paced action. I couldn't put it down and read 10 chapters straight! But while it's mainly plot-driven, it slows down in the middle to give us a glimpse into the characters and relationships. The pacing is divinely balanced and I cannot deny Milan's technical skills in this aspect. Some parts were cliche but this book is just so objectively good that I don't care.

Plus, let's discuss Milan's prose. Hers is simple, meant to keep you on the edge of your seat, just like how sci-fi books are usually written. But she knows how to trim the fat and hone every word. Her sentences are slim but some of them blew me right away.

Also, the revelation of the villain by the end? I'm into him. Lordt, I'm into him. Why am I like this.

This book was so good.

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Note: this is a very typical sci-fi read. If you're a fan of the genre and love focus on building character relationships, then this book is for you. But if you're looking for something wildly original, then this isn't it.

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Hey, all. This time of pandemic has hit many industries, not just the publishing industry. But as a hardcore bookworm, I am afraid to lose this community that I love. What will be left when this is all over?

We need art and literature more than ever right now.

Here are ways you can support books: authors, publishers, booksellers, libraries!


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1. Borrow ebooks or audiobooks from your library

The library might be physically closed but that doesn't mean you can't get any books! Download the Libby app and sign in with your library card to access their digital catalogue. You can always ask the library to add something if it isn't already available. Alternatively, ask if they do curbside deliveries for physical books. It doesn't hurt to check. Libraries aren't just a  public service; they've also got a huge impact on how much books sell. Borrowing a book from the library supports your favorite author as much as buying your own copy!


2. Buy from your local indie bookstores or Barnes & Noble instead of Amazon

Hey, even I use Amazon. It's cheap, quick, and easy. But Amazon exploits its workers, doesn't pay taxes, and has ruined the publishing industry to the ground. Instead of supporting their empire, send your local stores an email and ask how you can help. Even if they don't sell ebooks or aren't doing deliveries right now, you can still buy a gift card or preorder books. They'll need cash to ride out this horrible wave. We don't want to leave this with only Amazon standing.

If you're like me and don't have any more local bookstores open, then check out Kobo or other online alternatives.


3. Preorder books

Some publication dates are being pushed back. Others are being buried by the chaos of everyday life. Author events are being cancelled everywhere. Preorder the books you are excited for to prove that you still want to buy them. Even if they won't come out for months (or a year), your preorder will keep the business going.


4. Share the books you are excited for. Share the books you love.

Even though everyone has switched to digital marketing, you have to admit that it's difficult to compete for attention when we're going through a pandemic. But word of mouth is still the most effective way to spread news. Don't let your favorite books and authors become forgotten! Your friends probably need some distractions now too, and they know your taste enough to judge whether or not they'll like the same stuff. Imagine if you tweeted a book rec once and got 3 people to buy it. That's way more supportive than keeping the goods to yourself!

So gush about books on social media. Write Goodreads and Amazon reviews. Share posts from your favorite authors about their books. Tell the world what you're reading and why you love it.


5. Join webinars or online book launches/events

Just because we can't meet face to face doesn't mean we can't meet at all. Many authors have moved to livestreaming book launches, interviews, or book readings. Your presence, even virtual, will be highly appreciated. Check if your favorite authors have a social media account where they share these links.


6. Support online content creators through commissions or Patreon

Here's an open secret: majority of the people working in the publishing industry have a second or third job. Very few authors can write full time. Publishing assistants earn a measly amount. Agents survive on commission and don't have benefits. Every industry is getting hit right now, and times are tough. But if you can afford it, then why not buy someone a ko-fi, commission some art, buy a Patreon membership to see some original stories, or buy a newsletter subscription to read some articles about writing? Even 10 dollars can make a difference! And you know the money is going straight to the creator's pocket, not guzzled by a corporation.


7. Sign up for 30 day free trials

There are so many ways to get mass books by subscription. Audible. Kindle Unlimited. Scribd. Kobo. Why not give these packages a shot and see if you like them enough to continue? At least you'll be able to access as many books as you want in a safe, legal way. And you can gush about them too.


8. Request ARCs (advanced reader copies)

Just because a publication date is delayed doesn't mean the hype is over! If you're a book blogger then you probably have a Netgalley or Edelweiss account. If not, then it's easy to sign up, and you don't even need a big following. Of course, your following (and location) determines which books you can receive, but it doesn't hurt to try. Keep up the hype and help with the marketing! Also, this is a good way to access small press or indie novels. They'll need more assistance than the Big Five folks, so why not give them a hand?

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If you're in a tough spot right now and can't help monetarily, don't fret. Sharing support and resources is 100% free. But please do what you can. Take care and keep reading!

Are you working in the publishing industry? Do you have other suggestions? What have your experiences been like? Share them with us, if you can!
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Revision is my least favorite part of the writing process, but I think it's the most important one. Revision feels like pulling teeth, but it also means filling cavities and aligning your jaw. Basically, it turns your lump of a novel into a beautiful, useful, polished one.

Revising is insanely difficult, and it's better done with company. But unless your beta is a professional editor or has tons of experience, then they probably don't know what to look for outside of gut instincts. Help yourself and your beta by asking them the right questions!


Basic questions to ask your beta during revision

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Now, there are two types of revisions: major edits and minor edits. I'll start with the major stuff.

Q1. How is my pacing?

Pacing obviously depends on your writing style, category, and genre. A thriller would be more fast-paced than a literary novel. YA books tend to be fast-paced and easier to consume. But at the end of the day, you should follow the natural pacing that fits your story. Ask your beta if she thinks the scenes are happening too slow, or too fast, or if there are weird time jumps in between. You shouldn't bore your reader with five chapters of plain description, but at the same time, you shouldn't speed through the plot so fast that they don't have time to breathe or remember which character is which.

When rereading some of your favorite books, analyze them and figure out how the author paces their plot.

Q2. Does my protagonist have a believable goal/motivation? What is it?

Protagonists don't have to be likeable, but they have to be believable. A story is one big obstacle course. The protagonist's goal is the finish line. Sure... we know they have to win... by why? Why can't they just give up halfway through and go home? Why did they start in the first place? The best protagonists are the ones that feel like real life people and not just props to propel the plot forward. You make them seem real by giving them believable motives (even if they might change throughout the story). And while we could do broad strokes like: of course the Chosen One has to save the world! It's her responsibility! That's quite bland, isn't it? Give your protagonist a more personal reason, something that the reader can personally understand and even empathize with.


Q3. Can you identify my main conflict? Is it interesting enough?

You can't have a story without conflict, so make sure you choose a good one. But more importantly, make sure that it's identifiable. Conflicts can go deeper than the usual hero vs villain. Sometimes the protagonist has an internal conflict, or struggles with their own values, or even fights with their allies. The character should have a personal stake in the conflict, because if not, then why are they even fighting it? This might be obvious to you but it might not be obvious to your readers, so be sure to ask your beta if they can make out the proper reasons.

Q4. Did you understand my worldbuilding? Do you have any questions about the universe?

I mean, this can go one of two ways. Either you don't have enough worldbuilding so your reader is bored and/or confused, or you have too much at once and the reader is overwhelmed. If you lack worldbuilding then this question will help your beta figure out what else you need to answer. If your worldbuilding is too complex or info-dumpy, then your beta will probably tell you which parts were confusing.

Q5. Does the main couple have chemistry? Who do you ship?

Okay, this one only applies if you have a romance. We all hate instalove and ships with no chemistry and blah, blah, blah... but it's very easy to fall into the trap of writing a mediocre love story. On one hand, your beta can help you flesh out your main couple's romance even more, so that it's more believable and easier to root for. On the other hand, it might help you realize that there's a better ship that makes more sense, and would be more satisfying than who you originally intended would end up together. Romance is just as much about character growth as it is to entertain, so make sure that your love story is meaningful.

Q6. Did you find any part dragging?

Sometimes an intense plot needs time to breathe. And sometimes a story is meant to be languorous and serene. But too much of a good thing is bad, and you don't want to bore your readers. Better to ask this to a beta who really enjoys your work, so at least you'll know what's actually dragging and what's not just difference in taste. 

Q7. Do you want to know what happens next? Were you hooked from Chapter One?

Why does someone finish reading a book? Because they want to know what happens next! This advice applies more to writers like me who want to query their work. Unfortunately, we're in the publishing age of immediate consumption. Agents and editors want to be hooked in by the first chapter, the first five pages, the first sentence. And I know what you're thinking because I'm thinking it too. That's unfair. But if you think about it... as readers we are the same. Have you ever picked up an interesting looking novel at the bookstore or library, read the first chapter, and then decided whether or not you were going to buy it? Yeah, it's the same thing.

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Now, after you've decided that you need to delete half of your novel, opened a bottle of wine, begun to cry, typed three whole chapters, realized they were bad, retyped them, then realized the first version was better, then sent them back to your beta, then got better feedback, then finished all your revisions, gave your book some resting time, reread it again, actually found a small glimmer of hope... now, you're ready for minor edits.

I really suggest only doing minor revisions after you've finished the major ones, because otherwise it's a waste of time and effort. Spelling and grammar can always be fixed after the whole novel is finished. That's easy. That's simple. But changing the novel's pacing, structure, and even characters? That's the meat of revision.

Q1. Are there any inconsistencies?

This one requires a sharper eye. Maybe sometimes you use "fairy" but other times you use "faerie". Maybe a minor character's hair color changes halfway through the manuscript. Maybe your protagonist picks up a glass and completely forgets to put it back down before joining a swordfight. It's little details like these that can make your story seem clumsy.

Of course, there are deeper inconsistencies as well. You could have inconsistencies in worldbuilding, atmosphere, tone, characterization, and even theme. Those are more difficult to fix, but they are easier to spot. If you change them on purpose as a sign of character growth/plot progression, then remember that the process has to be believable. There should be basis for it, and an extreme change can't just happen out of the blue, and in one measly page. Build up is your best friend.

Q2. What else do you want to see?

Okay, this could also be a major question. But a second eye is helpful not just because it can spot errors that you missed... but also because it can spot possibilities that you missed. A good editor appreciates your story and characters as much as you do. Of course it's your story first and foremost... but don't forget to be open to others' ideas too!

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These are just basic questions. In my experience, the best revision comments I've ever received were specific to the story, and not too general. But hopefully this is still a good springboard for you, whether as a writer or a beta!

What other questions do you usually ask?
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